To: Mrs
Saraspathy MenonPrincipal
Chong Boon Secondary School
From: Wendy
Goh Gui
XiangClass monitor of Secondary
4E3
Date: 23
th January 2010
Proposal of the new buildings selection
I am Wendy
Goh Gui
Xiang, the senior student of 4E3. I am here to write to you regarding the new building that would be providing facilities for all students and people in the school. My fellow classmates and I have decided on which building would be the best addition to our school, thus, among the three suggestions, we have come out of a choice and that is the multi-media resource centre.
Though, the other two suggestions were also good. However, my fellow classmates and I felt that the multi-media resource centre is definitely a better choice. The theatre and concert hall could only benefits the drama groups and musicians. The teacher whom choice this because she said that: “This could be used by drama groups and musicians for school, community and combined events.” Hence, the theatre and concert hall can only benefits a number of students because not all of the students are in the drama groups and not all enjoy listening to music.
Beside that, the multi-purpose sports hall, including an indoor swimming pool could also only benefits those students who love to do sports. It is a healthy suggestion but, it will not help much for the students. The teacher chooses this as he said, “This could remain open after school hours and at weekends for use by members of the public.” In addition, the sports hall will be quite filthy as the public will also be using during weekends.
At last, we still came to a point that the multi-media resource centre would benefits the students most. By making use of the computer there, students can get to do their homework, research at there. Teacher said, “This could offer IT training opportunities for young and old, a digital resource library and even a
cyber café,” Thus, those students whom do not have computer at home, can always stay back at school to complete their homework.
In conclusion, the multi-media resource centre is definitely a worth well facilities. Hence, I sincerely hope that you would take our suggestions into consideration. I assure you that, it is really a good choice.
Yours sincerely
Wendy
Wendy
Goh Gui
XiangSenior student
4E3
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